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-- Avatar by *BlueHunter Commission-me -> [link] (\_/) (O.o) (^ ^) This is Bunny. Copy Bunny in your signature to help him to achieve the world domination! This picture is simply adorable! I absolutely love the dog's expression, texture of the trees, and the little ladybug on the leaf. (:
Hmm, I saw that you requested critique on this but since I don't have a subscription I'll just have to write it here. -fail- First off, did you intend to make the mushroom stems off-centered when connecting to the top of the mushroom? They are leaning to one side quite a bit. But I only see this in the top of the picture, the ones reaching to the sky. And also, the lines connecting from the stem to the edge of it don't look aligned right. Next...ly, the little mushrooms growing out of the tree to the very left of the picture look a little misplaced, and I personally think they should have either been left out or you should have added more to the side facing us. Same with the one in the center and very right where we can see it growing out of the sides, but not in front of us. I think there should have been more around those ones, facing us to make it look more together. Finally is the dog... I think it blends in with the background too much, with its color. Maybe you could have even made it the same color as the mushies and leaves to the very left of the picture. That would have looked better in my opinion. And also the hair looks really, really good but the ears don't look like they are connecting to the head well enough... because they look incredibly long and oddly shaped when you think about what's behind that hair. And last, the tail. It looks VERY long, unless you meant for it to be that long. But it is also heavy looking because it is to thick with such short fur for its thickness. I hope that was at least a little bit helpful! Overall it is definitely a real nice, and fun work of art. <3 I'm kinda even jealous of your skillz. D: Good luck with the future arts too, homie. -- Avatar by ~Zeerka |
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En sak som jag märkte rakt av var att man ser de svamparna i förgrunden underifrån, som om de satt ovanför kameran... men hunden är framifrån som ett straight on foto... Jag bara undrar om det var med mening eller inte? Är svamparna högre upp... isåfall hur..? Växer de på något?
Sedan... ARGH! Lens flare. Så... lame? Ursäkta men det är ett ganska stort no no.... skulle vara bättre utan, tycker jag. (Men det är en personal taste grej).
Anatomin på hunden är fin... någon slags blandning av collie och räv. Jag tänker inte gå in så mycket på det eftersom jag själv inte är så bra på det.
Ansiktet på hunden är ganska lol, man ser dig i det. Lite sådär busigt vidögd. Gulligt som faen.
Anyway, overall en fin bild med bara några "Wait a minute..." saker. Jag gillar dina djur, de är gulliga och har sånt liv.
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